Monday, February 18, 2008

I notice u standing there

The breeze ruffling my hair

Me thinks it’s a well set snare

But am too dazed to care

The concept being lofted up

Everything around me shutting down

As the sky turns grey

This time, predator becomes prey

This scenario gives u a high

I alone hear my sigh

The situation assumes a sense of brevity

I alone feel like a drunkard

Chasing my own center of gravity

Everyone has an inner burning fire

Including the challenged and the omnipresent liar

But the raging flames can be easily blown out

A boxer knocked out by his own bout

Watching the world roll and tilt

The natural curiosity can lead to temptation

Like a flower that’s gonna wilt

No one cares in case of mutual satisfaction

Myself being my best companion

I plead with the inner me

Use more than your eyes to see

If u don’t move fast enough

You’ll end up turning into slough



hey to whoever is reading this....pls do me a favour...suggest a suitable title for the "poem" and also add a few lines about ur thots after u finish reading the piece